A friend could be better if they can be trusted.
A friend should not be a bully because their friend will get angry and it will cause a big fight. A friend could be better if they play with each other, because I will feel lonely if they don't.
A friend should stop telling lies because their friend will say some unkind words.
The most important thing is, friends should stop fighting because they will hurt each other.
L.I- WALT write a persuasive writing.
Hi Xyril,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing because people can learn how their friends could be better. I like the part about friends not fighting with each other. When friends hurt each other, they ruin their friendship. I wrote a persuasive writing about friends when I was in Room 4 as well. How many friends do you have?