Kia Ora Xyril,I like how you have done it about rubbish because there is alot of rubbish everywhere in some places. Next time you could put the words bigger,and put more information in. At our school we do property patrol, each class has to pick up rubbish after break and lunch to help keep our school tidy. Do you have to do this at your school? We recycle all of our paper in the classroom and reuse what we can to help with the amount of rubbish.
Hello Madisyn, thank you for this positive comment, and yes I will make the font bigger and get more information. Also, thank you for that suggestion of helping our school tidy.
Hello Xyril! I really like the way you have told us that rubbish is a problem and that we should stop littering. Next time you could add a bit more reasons why and tell us how it could affect animals. :)
Kia Ora Xyril,I like how you have done it about rubbish because there is alot of rubbish everywhere in some places.
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At our school we do property patrol, each class has to pick up rubbish after break and lunch to help keep our school tidy.
Do you have to do this at your school?
We recycle all of our paper in the classroom and reuse what we can to help with the amount of rubbish.
From Madisyn
Hello Madisyn, thank you for this positive comment, and yes I will make the font bigger and get more information. Also, thank you for that suggestion of helping our school tidy.
DeleteHello Xyril! I really like the way you have told us that rubbish is a problem and that we should stop littering. Next time you could add a bit more reasons why and tell us how it could affect animals. :)
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