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Wednesday 26 August 2015

Should we stay in the moon ? Yes or No !?

I want to stay in the moon because I can learn new things about it.

I want to stay in the moon so I can float because there is very little gravity. I want to find out if there are minerals in the moon. 
I also want to learn about the meteors that have fallen to the moon.

The important thing is, I want to go to moon because I want to know if there are living things in it. 

L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing.

Friday 21 August 2015

Children should eat ice cream

Image result for ice creamIce cream is good because some flavours are delicious.

Children should eat ice cream because it cools them down during summer. They should be given ice cream because it has milk and it makes their bones strong. Ice cream is good because it doesn't have much sugar. 

The important thing is, children should eat ice cream because it also has vitamins from the fruits that can make you healthy.

L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing.

Friday 14 August 2015

Stop eating chocolates children !!!

Children should not be allowed to eat chocolates because they get hyperactive.

Children should stop eating chocolates because it makes them fat. Its not healthy and it makes their teeth rotten because it has too much sugar. 

The important thing is children should stop eating too much chocolates because they might get diabetes even if they are still young.

L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing.

Thursday 6 August 2015

How a friend could be better

A friend could be better if they can be trusted.

A friend  should not be a bully because their friend will get angry and it will cause a big fight. A friend could be better if they play with each other, because I will feel lonely if they don't. 

A friend should stop telling lies because their friend will say some unkind words. 

The most important thing is, friends should stop fighting because they will hurt each other.

L.I- WALT write a persuasive writing.