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Friday 14 August 2015

Stop eating chocolates children !!!

Children should not be allowed to eat chocolates because they get hyperactive.

Children should stop eating chocolates because it makes them fat. Its not healthy and it makes their teeth rotten because it has too much sugar. 

The important thing is children should stop eating too much chocolates because they might get diabetes even if they are still young.

L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing.

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