My mum's friend had just finished vacuuming the rug before we arrived. My mum's friend invited my sister and I to eat some of the left over food from little Grachel's birthday party. We had crème caramel some carbonara and pork blood stew, they were all my favourites! We ate some of the crème caramel first. It's just the right sweetness for my throat. I wasn't sure why we ate the dessert first. Then we ate the carbonara. it was very creamy from the cream. Then the final dish was the pork blood stew. We ate it with freshly cooked jasmine rice It was the best taste that my tongue has ever tasted. After that, we went outside to play with little Grachel.
However my sister was inside the house, so I was the only the one playing with Grachel. I saw a soccer ball but I just ignored it. That was a first for me because soccer is my favourite sport. I pushed the swing that Grachel was on and the swing went back and forth.
After that I took the soccer ball and started dribbling it. Grachel wanted to play as well so I gave her the ball and she kicked it. I tried to catch the tiny, dirty, pumped up soccer ball and I caught it but my jandals broke, so I went to ask my dad to fix it for me. My dad tried to fix it but he couldn't. It was really complicated, so I played soccer without my right jandal. After a little while, I felt tired so I sat down for a bit. Then my dad's friend gave me a pair of sport shoes and they fitted perfectly! Grachel and I went back to playing soccer for a bit. Then my mum said it was time to go home.
My favourite part was when I got my new sport shoes because I didn't have to buy any. That was the best!
Learning Intention: We are learning to follow the structure of a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write the orientation, followed by the events and a conclusion of my weekend playing with Grachel.
Hi Xyril,
ReplyDeleteI like your recount it's really intresting good job and keep it up!!